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night of passion


as the time was approaching nerve wracking wonderful feeling that is exciting knowing we were meeting anticipating the moment that will be breath taking full of confidence with no body parts of mine shaking that night was all about love making as we looked into each others eyes gazing we were talking about how our day was going afterwards, she went to take a shower water was running showers were spraying music was playing candle were lighting room was vibrating with sounds that was moving as we were laying kisses of sensationalizing touches of sensualizing theme was about us which was all centralizing intimate arousing sexual enticing sensual fulfilling her voice of echoing my name that was wide spreading pleasures we both were enjoying reaching highest point of climaxing when is was all over, she was hoping for something more than a sexual escapading my moment of defining came to light knowing i wanted the same, needed to make sure i knew what i was saying as i ask, her eyes were staring at me to see if i was lying as i told her, i say what i mean, i mean what i say, there is no denying but then as time went, there was distant it became a constant didn't feel like i'm in a relationship felt more like a partnership i find myself falling in love with someone else and what's frightening she feels that way towards me undeniably i know what i have to do in order to make this relationship unquestionably remarkable journey of true commitment and love begins in which we are already embracing
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Reinanena
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ty 4 your support sweetie i meant every word i said it's about how a man makes a woman feel
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