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CC BYOn a thing you can't look away from,
It's shining light blinds it's participants,
From a most amazing sight.
Our monopoly blocks our spirit too look onward.
Follow your path you construct and build.
Mold it's following extant soul.
Don't dim your light.
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˖ ݁♬⋆.˚𝄞Hi I'm Giana, my pronouns are She/Her. I'm a Senior in Highschool!!˖ ݁♬⋆.˚𝄞 I love art, toucans and pizza. I especially love writing my feelings into poems or into a painting instead. I also collect My little pony cards <33!! . Thank you for taking the time to read all of this and I hope you enjoy my works! :3 Good thing come to those who wait ✧✶★.
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Mix of personal exhortation and abstract ideas about light, spirit, path.
Multiple layered ideas compressed into short lines; dense conceptual content.
Motivational and encouraging tone; emphasis on light and growth despite obstacles.
Imperative commands create urgency; active verbs like 'Follow,' 'Mold,' 'Don't dim.'
Seven lines total; falls in micro to very short range.
Light as metaphor for spirit/potential; monopoly as metaphor for blockage.
Primarily lyric internal voice with direct address; some dramatic exhortation.
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