No Hope

January 4, 2014

As I lay here pondering on my imperfections, failures, and mishaps the darkness of the demon consumes my soul and gives me no hope for resolution and salvation.

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faheyamgJan 4, 2014

<p>What an interesting piece of writing. So few words, but truly contemplative. I wish I could see into your thoughts and learn more. The more I read this the more it gets me. I think people give too much thought to the structure of a poem rather than the depth of its contents. Thank you for creating such deep content without distracting syntax, excessive metaphors: just poetry, raw thought in the way it should be. Thank you. Keep writing! </p>

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