No Love

May 21, 2013

The future, A life worth living, Not what I see, I see a place where society isn't truly free, Love, is lost Truths, are tossed Hope can only be bought, But where do we begin to fight, Unite, we must find a way, Ignorance brings no light, Change our attitudes Start to feel, Find our weak ones, help them heal, Unite the world as a whole, Think equally, spite is the toll, Teach ourselves how to be sane, People must know, words spark pain, Use our hearts to help us succeed, Without love, who are we.

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Comments (4)

temorymaMay 21, 2013

Thank you so much for the feedback, I'm new to poetry so I wasn't aware! But I appreciate the love haha

temorymaMay 21, 2013

Updated the rhythm!

garrick.voigtMay 21, 2013

I liked the message you delivered; however, with the current punctuation, the poem seems faster than it should be; readers only pause at punctuation, not at the end of a line. With that said, I enjoyed this poem and, heck, maybe you wanted the rhythm that fast.

temorymaMay 21, 2013

Just a little entry on how I feel humanity is acting as a whole towards one another.