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No More Lying, This is the Truth


No More Lying, This is the Truth Actions always prove why words, minus The Lord's Word, means absolutely ZERO/don't ask why I left this rare situation (why y'all ain't called!!!) with ZERO conversation, to keep it G tho???/thank you for keeping it G bro with your revelation so you ain't gotta show me how much you love me, I see it through the peephole/and the downside of being spiritually intelligent is always trying to see things from the point of view from my amigos/being spiritually aligned with the unseen is one thing and trust me, you can judge me when I say accountability feels like an attack when your consistently receiving a free pass/believe me, healing isn't happiness, it's just learning how to carry my pain through the rain differently with my imaginary ski mask/and I'll be damned if I ever lose another second or less than from sitting in 4th Ave cause I finally done snapped from all the mean things she and he, and demons consistently speaks to me and I will never EVER put love above respect, you can keep that/I don't need that, and I may not know how many tomorrows I may have, so today I remain mad but for no more than 3 minutes max, then forever forget that lke dust on the night stand/and if a salesmen tries to sell man or the mailman his special May add which is " pay half when signing up for the "Eye for an Eye app" you'll be damned if you buy that/and why ask questions you know the answer to like "hey Derm do you still take vyvanse"/montherducker is your God Adolf? and was I not born hi on crack? And it is fact, I need chaos, you judge and say it's a love thing, you can buy that, I like that/but please don't try that for any circumstance and I mean it bro, you can hurt me or murk me, I will still love you homez, and you know it hurts you to love me unconditionally, I'm the kidney stone you couldn't bypass/but I will not treat you like how you human beings treat me dude but me to a Jew, who the bleep is you, I'm a G through and through, ain't this true???? Rivers don't drink there own water, trees don't eat there own fruit? Christians claim that Jesus is there Father, and they believe every human being at Dairy Queen pleading for a dollar for a water or a dollar ice cream cone wit one scoop.... I forgive you 💯 ✌️ 🪨 💕 🙏
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Primarily personal/autobiographical with some philosophical moments about spirituality and accountability.

SparseMeasureDense

Extremely dense; multiple interconnected ideas layered rapidly throughout without traditional stanza breaks.

DarkSentimentBright

Mixed: anger and frustration balanced against forgiveness, unconditional love, and spiritual acceptance.

StillEnergyExplosive

Explosive, stream-of-consciousness delivery with rapid shifts, caps, punctuation marks, colloquialisms, and confrontational tone.

MicroLengthEpic

Single extended block exceeds 61 lines; dense paragraph-form poem with minimal line breaks.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphors (peephole, ski mask, kidney stone, rivers/trees, Eye for an Eye app) woven throughout.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; confessional, first-person reflective throughout without dramatic persona shifts.

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