"No" Won't Stop Me

by WaterHazrd

May 18, 2015

People dont understand perseverance or dedication

The word "no" won't stop me, it onsets irritation

That somehow it is thought that I will not get what I want

If waiting is what it takes, then let all the time be gone

I can wait forever, love is patient so am I

Just because I am 14? But I am one hell of a guy!

I have just about no self-esteem but I believe people that matter

I don't belong in any group, my status is scattered

Unpopular, but popular. Weird, but cool.

Plus I rock every peice of cotton of the end of a spool

I am good looking, I am smart, I am fun, I am caring

I am loving, I am sensitive, I am happy, I am daring

I have a big heart, I am kind, I am trustworthy, I am loyal

I am patient, I will wait until my girl will be my royal

Crowned queen of my world, dictator of my heart

It might hurt for a while, It might tear me apart

But why would I give up on having my one true love?

Simple answer: I won't! Thats what I am made of

This girl is my world, no one will get in my way

I will marry her one day, no matter what you say

This is my life, she is my girl

This is my destiny, she is my world

And you think you can stop me? Thats a rich statment

Seeing everyone on our side, yet your side seems so vacant

I have my drive to get what I want and that is all I need for now

Until I have her, I am not sure where or how

She will be mine! I will have her forever

And there's nothing that will keep us from being together

If she believes just as I, then I know we will be okay

The next for years for me and her surely will not be lonely

She is going to a new place with new people and new chances

I have friends who care about me, 3 years of school and 2 dances

I will dance with you one day

The day we will call our anniversary

I will have her, keep her, and love her alike

And prove that this whole time, even though you didnt like

Me, I still was worth it and I treated her well

And I will treat her well forever, maybe you will accept me if I sell

All these words to your mind, make sure you believe them

All of them are true, and I will not delete them

Nothing will stop me...I am in love with her so

The only thing that I wont do...is let her go...

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OverMay 18, 2015

I can physically feel my heart smiling at your words!! :') You truly are all of those things, I know that with all of my heart. "No," is a harsh statement, but it doesn't mean the end. I love you!It hurts, a lot, and it will probably hurt for a long while... and I'm so sorry for that.. but I promise you, after the time has come and passed... I will be right there - just for you...!There is nothing in this world - no one else in this wholeentire world - that will ever make me happier than I am with you. There is no one else on this planet or in this solar system that will hold my heart! No one. I love you.  I believe in One Day. I believe that love is patient. I know this makes things, "worse," but I want to hold on. With all of my heart, I want to keep you within me. I know, we can't talk, anymore. I know, it's going to hurt so bad... Seeing you every day and not saying a word... but, in the end... I know, it would have all been worth it.  Because what are words?Well... when they're true... They're everything.