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NOCTURNAL NATURE


Pensively promenaded I, as impetuous as a poet To accumulate few jocund inkling on dusk For sure, not as a bard But,as a novice to nature Stalked I, bare-footed anigh lake Jabbed some spines beneath my foot Yon reconnoitred I, do any luminuous light clandestined in water? Else, any celestial gem floats in lake? Nay! it's the waxing moon in the sky That seemed to tread on water. Paddled I into the lake To grab some pallied lillies Hardly perceived I any bloomed one! Had the lillies been sailed under false colour by moon? I knew not their intrigue Nor had I, prescient criteria Chillness of water benumbed me Retrieved I, as cool as a cucumber to the bank Is this terra God's palette? Obviously! nature is the art of God. Dark grey was lake's scenario Stood reeds augustly amidst the lake. Casuarina broke into tumult When the west wind passed adriftting it Glow worms scattered round the bushes Heard I, croaking of frogs. I felt languished by chillness That pierced my chest and nostrils Homeward bound,strolled I For I had been there behind my father's back. As being benumbed by drastic cold I was at the end of my tether. Soon felt I, in the arms of Morpheus On the grass, supine anigh lake By morning, I began to fly off at a tangents When an highland lass harped on my shoulder I began to know the ropes of that wintry night For it cajoled me to sleep, resembling lullaby.
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N.MOHANARANGAM

N. Mohanarangam, born on 25 September 1973 in Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India, is an Indian poet whose work is distinguished by its engagement with the classical traditions of English poetry, particularly the sonnet. His poetry brings together Renaissance diction, Shakespearean linguistic influences, classical mythology, romantic sensibility, and vivid natural imagery, creating a distinctive voice that bridges the literary past and the contemporary world.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal nocturnal lake adventure with philosophical musings on nature.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense layering of imagery, sensations, and reflections throughout poem.

DarkSentimentBright

Mixed: wonder and beauty tempered by physical discomfort and exhaustion.

StillEnergyExplosive

Active verbs (jabbed, stalked, paddled) create kinetic movement throughout.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 44 lines; falls in 31-60 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphors, similes, personification, archaic diction create highly ornamented language.

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Pure lyric internal voice; introspective first-person reflection on experience.

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Comments (3)

N.MOHANARANGAM
Dear Rajdeep, Do accept my sincere gratitude. Receiving compliments from an Indian makes me literally elated. This mirrors your good nurture of your thoughts and gives me an insight of your knowledge.
Rajdeep_Mellowy
I bow down to your pen and your mind. ✍️🫡🫡 Proud to be an indian when I see poets like you in this world of western influences
Rajdeep_Mellowy
I read all you poem , and found every poem spoken by a storyteller. A amature master of moods engulfing hidden grief in every line smoothly masked by the beauty of words. Keep writing my friend.

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