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July 11, 2015

i saw you in a crowed room

all i wanted was you

nobody else in the room mattered

i saw your face

i melted inside

i want to say something

i wish i could

your still to friagle

still broken

still hurt

i want to mend your broken heart

all i want is you

nobody else matters

but you do

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