Not a Feeling
I am the rain.
The puddles to step on, the wet hair of those passing by
The surrounding world blurs my vision,
I slam into the solid concrete with each drop.
Then you call me with a smile, vowing to help me
You are the sun.
You love me.
I am a flame.
The flicker of a candle, the warmth of a fireplace
The surrounding world is mine for the taking,
I burn with an eternal passion with each passing minute
And you light me again when my fire goes out
You are my friend.
You respect me.
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