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Not My Head


he says, "you wouldn't want to be in my head..."
but its the joke that put people at ease
mostly because it's their humor that's a little out there
 
then there's, "you would in mine. it would be an adventure"
and its true
a day, an hour... man, even a minute would be something worth seeing.
worth being in.
knowing him it would be an endless ride of nothing but 
Fun.
 
but as for me, i stay quiet.

i don't think anyone would want to be in my head. not any rational people at least.
it gets really cluttered with
Noise.
 
about something... not sure what it is... it all comes so fast
and they all just talk over each other
that i can't comprehend what the point of it all is.
but i know its not good. its far from good.
its...
sad.
very...
sad.
and i don't know why.

 

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