not for sale

March 21, 2013

Taken from home seeing a whole new world Being so young not knowing what human trafficking really was Until she saw men she didnt know She Finally realized what it ment to be sold Used and abused, crying like never before feeling so unloved, forcing herself to call this new place home Being forced to sell her little body and told what to do cant say no, because her feelings dont count a world so full of hate with no sympathy for those who would pay scars that will never leave memories she will never forget hoping one day this would all change

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BostonRider36Mar 21, 2013

I like your message over all. I am curios why you capitalized Finally. And as you go from each line, you seem to deviate from capitalizing the first word to not and than it just seems to be a mixed pattern. I am not criticizing, just seeing how this is contributing to the poems message. Great job overall though.

fernandezf18Mar 21, 2013

this is about human trafficking and little girls being bought and sold for sex.