Not Your Average Love Poem

September 24, 2012

Love can be good, But sometimes someone comes along, And does something they never should. It breaks your heart, They tell you that they love you, But they planed to hurt you from the start. Then there’s the ones who love you, But they have far too much lust, So they could never stay true. I hate how this one guy made me feel, Telling me he loved me and that I was beautiful, He told me so often I thought it was real. It almost seemed like a match made by Cupid But then he cheated, And for falling for him, I felt really stupid. Love has never been good to me, I am single now, And it makes me feel so free. But I really wish someone could love me, For who I really truly am, And make me feel so amazingly free.

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Comments (3)

Griff91Sep 25, 2012

Thank you so much!

ambercurry37Sep 25, 2012

I like how you stuck one verse in there that made it seem like you liked to be single. I like the pattern of the rhymes, too.

Griff91Sep 24, 2012

I was single when I wrote this. But now I've found someone who loves me for who I truley am and makes me feel so happy I could burst. :)