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Nothing.


I left a shadow for some time
 
which disappeared but once was mine
 
I left my mark upon the earth
 
a temporary scar on dirt.
 
It's not about a permanence 
 
it's in the actions that you take
 
it's making someone smile again
 
it's helping heal the hurt.
 
Remember not to be afraid
 
before you were, you weren't
 
you're only going back again
 
what's learned will be unlearned
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<p>Also tried this version but am unsure which was better. &#39;Helping heal the hurt&#39; seems corny.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">I left a shadow for some time</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">which disappeared but once was mine</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">I left my mark upon the earth</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">a temporary scar on dirt.</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">It&#39;s not about a permanence&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">it&#39;s in the actions that you take</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">it&#39;s making someone smile again</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">it&#39;s recognising your mistakes.</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">Remember not to be afraid</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">before you were, you weren&#39;t</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">you&#39;re only going back again</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">&nbsp;</div><div style="font-size: 12pt; -webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-stretch: inherit; line-height: inherit; vertical-align: baseline;">what&#39;s learned will be unlearnt.</div>

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