Nothing Worse...

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 11:08 -- FindHer

Location

10466
United States
40° 53' 19.4604" N, 73° 50' 52.0332" W

This is when your jaw drops,
You've finally seen the agony of a man that serves another for scraps,
Builds a family from the ground up and still can't see the light,
Que tienen miedo de la soga y de morir
Pero de llegar aqui pueden proclamarcen muerto.
Dehumanize the servant and take away the dream,
Oh press, oppress them and give them the title of enemy.

Comments

jwiener

You showed a great writing skill in the word play in the last line of the poem ("oh press" and "oppress"), and it helped to make the poem very powerful.

upnorthdavid

Poderoso! Gracias

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