Notice Me
No one ever notices when you're trying to become a better you
But everyone sees when you're angry
I left that dark place and old me, but still
Everyone wants to see me there, I don't know why
I hate it there..
No one ever notices when you're doing well
But everyone sees when you're doing poorly
I like the light and the sun
And everyone wants me back in that dark place
I don't know why..
I've been doiing good, smiling bright
Which no one ever sees
I don't want a medal or an award
I want acknowledgement
A glance, a look, a stare..
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