Notice Me
I am surrounded by people,
I am physically here,
But mentally gone
And no one notices.
As long as I reply
Or make the appropriate response,
They are satisfied.
But while they laugh,
I cry.
If I were to turn to the sun,
No one would notice,
No one would care.
They claim they are friends
They know it's not true,
Before I was here,
I was totally alone
Wrapped in a blanket
Of my own despair
When they talked
I talked back,
Desperate to be liked.
I found him here.
When I talked everyone because deaf
But not him
He was standing right there
He pulled my blanket
Shared it with me,
And took away the pain.
I wish I could do that,
For you some day.
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