Ocean Girl
Lovely ocean girl
Your tears are falling
forming oceans and lakes
on the gound
You're wild, like storm tossed waves,
beautiful (the way oceans always are)
but most of all
You're sad.
You're so sad, so lovely.
Your sadness seeps out of you
like mist from mountains
(hovering around you like clouds)
Beautiful ocean girl
return to the sea
lose your sadness in the waves
become a force of nature.
Goodbye my lovely ocean girl.
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