Ocean Waves

The ocean waves came pounding down
So fast, I can’t breathe so I drown
Around me there are shades of blue
And all I know is I'll miss you
The water was so cold
I miss the warmth of your loving hold
I wish there was more time
For me to live in my prime
I'd tell you I love you
Deeper than the ocean blue
These ocean waves were 
Just a blur,
They were so beautiful from my position
But if only I knew my true condition
For my last thought in those waves all I saw was you
And I was happy because you were the only love I knew

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