Odd Love Versus My Love
My Love comes from what I have seen. A lovely woman with a broken man. She appears to be shy and sweet but becareful and do not step on her feet. He is wild out there chasing meat, exploring life looking for treats. Together they had several seeds who came with many needs. He loved the streets and she loved their home but every Saturday night she felt alone. This went on for several years until he lost control of his gears. He layed for several days in a uncomfortable gown, while she stood by his side with a frown. She stayed strong for him and all of their seeds watching him surivie with additional needs. He finally realized that it was time to slow down but that was only the man that created every ground. No matter how bad he was to her she held her family tight with all her might and showed forgiveness because he finally reallized she had all the fight.
Your Love is different from what I have seen he slapped her and was very mean. She may have cheated and that is wrong which caused them not to be so strong. He said he loved her and she said she loved him but they both had different stems. He wanted to grow as a family but she wanted to grow as an individual. He wanted a place to call home but she wanted someone to support her shopping habbits. He left her behind her back which caused a lot of cracks. It wasn't long til she found a man with money but acted as if she wanted him to be her honey. Love is not a game it comes with alot of pain.
My love is different because she stood strong.
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