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The Odd One

by bh7683

When you plunge into this world Do not be afraid to breath. Take in this sea let my hand free And become a fish of many.
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jwiener
I really like how the middle of the poem rhymes, with the lines "Take in this sea / let my hand free" because it adds to the tension and imagery of the poem. Great work! If you are interested in writing more simple poems that pack a big punch, check out "poetry writing tips" for acrostic and haiku poems in the "resources" section!

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