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Oh my Mind

by Bubble Bee

I want to see the sunlight Beautiful and bright I want to see the moon Smiling at noon I want to dance with stars Whilst lying in the grass I want to feel the wind Whispering in the trees And when I lose my rhythm I’d go back to these little things And feel, feel all again And breathe alive again
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Bubble Bee

Hi! I'm a student and a huge fan of poetry! I don't usually talk about my feelings in front of others and poetry allows me to express myself without worrying about judgement or misunderstanding. I hope that you'll be able to find your safe haven in my poems, too ;D

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Your Poem's Voice

PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal desires and observations grounded in concrete imagery, minimal abstraction.

SparseMeasureDense

Meditative pacing with repeated 'I want' structure; one idea per 2-3 lines.

DarkSentimentBright

Hopeful, yearning tone with positive imagery; grounding mechanism for recovery.

StillEnergyExplosive

Gentle, contemplative voice; subdued movement despite wish-list structure.

MicroLengthEpic

14 lines; falls in 7-15 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Moderate use of personification (moon smiling, wind whispering) and gentle metaphor.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric interior voice; introspective first-person consciousness throughout.

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Comments (2)

Bubble Bee
Thank you!🥹
Rajdeep_Mellowy
The heaven of every soul found your words all, like a ruined monument midst of a war.

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