oh say can you see

oh say can you seee this burden youve put on me since birth its not just emotional man im hurt struck down in violence like a violin bangin on your justice doors sayin oh pleese let me in let me take the stand be the man to defend his own plan but i cant... so i ask oh say canyou see whats happening to you and whats happening to me.

This poem is about: 
My country

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