OLD AGE : A BAD PHASE OF LIFE

Location

India

A COUNTRY WITH MILLIONS OF SHOULDERS

BUT NOT A SINGLE TO SUPPORT THE ELDERS.

THEY GAVE BIRTH TO US WITH LOTS OF DREAMS 

BUT WE EXTINGUISH ALL THE GLEAMS.

IN THE PAST,WHENEVER YOU WERE ANGRY

SOMEONE ALWAYS SLEEPS HUNGRY,

BUT NOW SHE IS BOTH ANGRY AND HUNGRY 

AND FOR HER WE DONT HAVE A PANTRY.

WE ALL WORKS IN A BIG FIRM 

AND LEFT THEM IN A OLD AGE HOME.

THIS IS THE SITUATION OF OUR MODERN ERA,

WHERE ALL THE PARENTS ARE KEPT WITH NO CARE.

 

PAUSE YOUR BUSY AND COZY LIFE

AND THINK WHAT THEY HAVE DONE FOR YOU

NEVER FORGET ALL THOSE STRIVES.

IS THIS THE ONLY REASON THAT OLD AGE

IS CALLED THE WORST PHASE OF LIFE

I OPPOSE,BECAUSE THIS IS THE BEST PHASE

WHEN YOU WILL EXPERIENCE IT

YOU WILL FIND THAT YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A 

MESS

This poem is about: 
My country
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snehapanini

THANK YOU ALL FOR COMING THIS SITE AND READING MY POEM BY TAKING OUT TIME FROM YOUR BUSY LIFE.BUT THIS IS A TOPIC WHICH SHOULD BE DISCUSSED AND CONDEMNED.

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