Old Flannels
I noticed you that very day in the brightest way
I knew now to look in your eyes
I button up my coat as I listen to your voice
You tell me the stories of you and your friends
I smile as we loose our way through the forest
You laugh at my punny jokes
You say you don't know why he broke my heart
We laugh until it hurts
As we drive through town, we've never known
We jokingly yell "There is no plan"
Your old flannel and the stick shift you drive
Nothing more American than a grey eyed boy
I pick the paint off my nails as I look at you
Then he called me beautiful and he said my name
And he told me he wants to take things slow
The first flurries of winter blow through the town
Then he got nevous about "The old boyfriend"
I laughed at him and said "You don't have to worry"
My poor little dear, I think he still worries
But we still laugh until it hurts
As we drive through town, we've never known
We jokingly yell "There is no plan"
Your old flannel and the stick shift you drive
Nothing more American than a grey eyed boy
I pick the paint off my nails as I look at you
Torn up boots and greasy gas stations
Running through parks and seeing old friends
Distrubing the peace at all the libraries
Beating him at pool games and breaking the rules
Catching him off gaurd with my surprizing hugs
I hope he plans to stay a while
I hope he plans to stay a while
I wouldn't mind to laugh again
I hope he plans to stay a while
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