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Once there gone


Once you're by yourself you're alone

You don't have anyone to call your own 

You're sad and lonely 

You wish you weren't the only 

You wish you had someone with you all times 

You're depressed and need a friend in your life 

When you're alone your life stops 

On your knees you drop 

Then  you pray for your love ones 

When will the sadness be done!! 

 

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Comments (10)

Jvega
<p>I like you used examples of people having depression and that we NEED to stop it. ~ N.O.</p>
Jvega
<p>i liked your rhyming nick.m</p>
Jvega
<p>I like how you rhymed. -Erika</p>
Jvega
<p>This is good and sad if you feel like this i am sad-javiervelasco</p>
Jvega
<p>it rhyme veary well-victor</p>
Jvega
<p>nice job i really like your peom-jessica</p>
Jvega
<p>you did a really good job!-Blanca</p>
Jvega
<p>That was sad, but it was still good.-Geraldine</p>
Jvega
<p>jose cisneros/ you did a good job and good work&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
Jvega
<p>marco jimenez: your poem was great you did a great job!</p>

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