Once there was a Captain...
Once there was a knight
Who lived strong, stubborn
As the battles she waged
None fought as fierce or bold
Or with the same fearsome grace.
She trained every day and hour
To crush any false power.
Once there was an orphan
Raising both brother and sister.
She worked any job that paid
For any meal - unswayed.
Yet, somehow,
She found time to learn,
To defend and secure.
Once there was a Queen,
Wise and strong
Though young, she would nurse
Her kingdom’s rise.
With one ride through a village,
She found true strength
Formed in fierce young woman
Who worked to bones,
For flesh and blood.
Yet also showed talent
Invaluable to power.
A fateful bargain struck:
One must train as a soldier,
First chance of her kind.
In return, had been Promised
Both brother and sister fed
Blessed in chance and time.
Once there were two sisters,
One born royalty
Ruled wise with power and grace,
One born peasantry,
Fought hard to eat, to stay alive.
Through bargain, with time
Sisterhood bloomed strong.
Trust, loyalty never lost.
Time goes on.
Through training and talent,
Dedication,
Luck and drive. When pushed,
Push Back.
Once there was a Recruit,
Talented and Tough.
Admiration grew,
Where envy bloomed treachery.
Though isolated,
Friendship born of jealousy.
Jealousy stemmed from admiration,
Though grudging, it was.
Once there was a Captain's Son
Born to fight, though hesitant
,
To change tradition.
Though respectful
To the other world,
Lacked understanding
And blinded by olden ways,
Thus more cautious to fight one
Of Feminine grace.
Thus ignorantly urged
The Recruit to return home, safe.
Frustration grew on both sides:
“You should mind your own business,
You careless, dumb oaf!”
“You are foolish and reckless!
You are not meant for this!”
Finally, a duel issued:
With victory
She would earn her place.
With defeat,
She would leave her place.
Swords clashed,
Blood and Honor at stake.
Foolish, he held back.
She was not so nice.
She fought, ruthless and fearsome.
Too late, he learned his mistake.
Forcefully, taking his sword,
She tackled, pinning him down.
“Yield,” She ordered, voice cold.
Reluctantly, He did.
Begrudgingly,
He offered a truce.
She was willing to accept,
‘Till He spoke:
“You fight quite well - for a girl.
No truce was struck.
So much indignation
Boiled inside her.
This spoiled Brute judged her,
Thought her weak,
Would force her out,
Send her family to Starve,
Lose their chance
For a better life -
Because She was a girl?
She took his outstretched hand
And twisted it - nearly Snapped.
She grabbed his scruff,
Undertunic clenched in a fist.
Nose to nose, inches apart
She spoke, glare older than age,
Voice quiet, yet trembling
With fiery rage:
“I am sick of your Idiocy.
You know not who I am,
Where I come from,
Or why i am here?”
“Yet, you feel it’s right
To judge me,
Tell me what I am,
What i am made for,
What i can do?”
“You don’t know me,
You know nothing about me!
You don’t know how difficult
My life has been, till now.
So Never assume my limits!”
She pushed him to the dirt,
“Never speak to me
Till you leave
Your chauvinist Fantasies
Behind, and understand
Reality!”
She sheathed her sword
And went to great her siblings.
The excitement of children
Calms her rage
As she holds them close.
She takes them by each hand.
They share their lessons.
Happy, cheeks full.
So much brighter than before.
He watched them go,
Confused by her words.
Yet He knew,
There was something about her
That made him want to know her
In the way She claimed
He didn’t.
Weeks went by.
Training went further
Promotions and duties
Issued.
Once there was a Captain,
Commander of Soldiers,
By His agreement,
A Tournament was ordered.
Of such contest
There were three challenges
Each a test
Of skill and intellect.
Winner of which would receive
A prize of prestige,
Position of Apprentice
Under second in command.
Any and all
Of army, welcome.
From recruit
To knight
To any who bare
The Queen’s coat of Arms.
If they could pass
The first Challenge:
The Entrance exam
Once there was a young Cadet
Who seized this opportunity
A chance to truly
Show thanks,
Pay a debt,
And prove a keen point
She dove further into her
Training, practicing every day,
Sunrise to sunset,
And stopping only for meals
And to break with family.
Though slightly disadvantaged:
Very few would spar with her
A Woman.
Those that did
Went to easy on her.
Once there was a Captain’s Son
Who came to admire
Greatly, one Cadette.
Though she still remained
Cold and distant,
Many times,
He worked earn her favor.
One day,
Tournament but a weak away,
He happened upon
Her hour of morning Drills.
He watched as she defeated
Her fabricated foe.
He had yet to see
Any beauty to match this site
A dummy gutted and slain.
Though, perhaps,
It wasn’t the Dummy
That was Beautiful.
Seeing chance
To make amends,
He hollered:
“M’Lady,
Might i have the honor
Of testing thine’s great prowess?”
She regarded Him,
Cool and aloof,
“I feel I must decline.
There is no test without challenge”
Undeterred, he grinned at Her wit.
Bowing Oh So dramatically,
“Oh won’t you take pity,
On this naive fool?”
With an eye roll,
A quick, “To Hell with it,”
And swords were clashing fast.
He long learned
Never go easy on an equal.
She was quite the opponent,
He mused in thought.
Even in her exhaustion,
She fought Beastly.
Eventually,
They reached a draw.
At break, they talked
And learned
And laughed - as she would deny.
The sun went down
And the day was over.
The weak went by
New friendships grew
All seemed well
That’s when Treachery
Boiled over.
Once there was a First Lieutenant
A selfish, cruel man
He would not tolerate a
“Worthless Wench outside their place”
At word of her entrance,
The First Lieutenant,
Outraged,
As if such news
Struck out of spite.
For, he was sure
She would not last this long.
“How dare she!” he howled
Alone, in his home,
“I will not stand this:
Such a vile insult!”
This Tournament,
His chance to find
A mind to mold for his use,
Ruined by that Peasant Whore!
He could tolerate orders
From a Wench Monarch,
He could tolerate a Wench
Playing knight with the big boys
It might be funny! -
But a woman knight - Truly?
Outrageous!
He had spent to long
Bribing, cheating, and lying
To get his power,
To be spoiled some Wench!
He argued
For hours
With that Mochary
Of a Captain.
To no avail,
The imbecile stood stubborn
And let this outrage fly by.
Any man worth his own weight
Would see this Wench hanged
But this fool Captain's
Weakness proved incompetence.
Another reason
Why power should be changed.
Left with no choice
‘Cept lose to the Wench -
He found the strongest poison
And waited.
Once there was a Competitor
For a Tournament of knights.
The morning of Entrance rounds
Found her breakfast strangely tart.
However,
With no time to finish
She moved to early practice.
The Captain's Son,
Whom went to join
Noticed her sweety and feint
Odd - takes more to tire her out.
“Are you well?” He asked.
“I’m fine,” She panted.
Despite her words
She felt tired, Nauseous, weak
But she wouldn’t dare give in
She would be thrown to the wolves
First weakness she showed.
Though respectful of her needs,
One Captain's Son
would not see why
A mistake shows worse
On a Woman among Men.
Through every match
He glanced, nervous
Afraid for her health.
He learned,
Her boar’s head - unbeatable.
So he settled -
Guarding her health
Praying she would live
Past the last match.
Exhausted and sick,
Stomach arguing
With itself - She pushed forward.
She fought with all her fire.
Finally, reaching last dual.
If won - she shall move forward.
If lost - more chance to be less.
Even so,
Her strength failing,
Surely She would fall,
Had she not glanced ahead.
Just a glimpse,
At that arrogant smirk
That donned her opponent
Raised her ire
Fast.
With new, short strength
She forced his blade, gone
Kicked his feet out
And held him at blade’s tip.
Victorious,
She moved on.
As she journeyed to rest
The First Lieutenant
Bitter, at Her Triumph.
Raging at her Victory
Plotted once more.
Second Tasked drew near,
Practice and Preparation
For this test is accuracy.
Catapults,
Archery,
Ballistas,
A simple Axe throwing
Any test of one’s
Knowledge and aim.
The First Lieutenant plotted.
Treachery is best,
But what to tamper?
Archery and Axe throwing?
No way to tell
Her tools from others.
To weaken them all?
Would peek investigation.
Catapults and Ballistas?
Easy for mistakes
Machinery so complex -
Problems happen all the time.
By expectation,
A woman would fail
As useless as expected
With archery and axes.
Once there was a Competitor
Who had trained with bows and blades
Whose proficiency
Of such arts - not likely matched.
For every Target -
Precision deadly.
Victory Acceptable,
If - No less than First.
Come time of the catapults
Armed at the cliff-side,
Set sights on the sea stacks
Wait - Something was wrong.
Hesitant, was the oak arm
Stopping too soon.
Threw off her aim.
To on lookers,
Her aim was false.
Luckily,
A judge knew broken, busted
Equipment by trained eyesight.
Before voicing such knowledge,
The judge stopped -
For the Competitor knew,
Already, where there was fault.
Judging the main gears,
She found a stone slab
Jammed where it shouldn’t.
Strange, She thought.
What and How rang in Her mind.
No matter.
However, she failed,
This, Now, was how she wouldn’t.
Once searched, the gears turning clear.
The arm ready for battle
As Her skill determined -
She was to be feared.
Though her victory now claimed,
Her skill rewarded,
And her keen knowledge marvel’d,
Her thoughts wander to that stone
Though seemingly at random -
Was quite curious.
Wedged between the gears,
It’s placing, just so
Where forcing the arm to stop
Just short full potential, though…
Though nagging,
Such thought pushed away
Favor to ballista tests.
Targets positioned.
Prepped ammunition.
Ballista ready
Her aim locked, steady…
Target on the sea-stacks…
As she was about to fire
She noticed -
The Drawstring -
To worn and torn for battle.
“Stop!” - she ordered.
She unstrung the line.
With a view around,
She spotted her solution:
Growing on a tree,
A keen type of vine
Perfect as makeshift rope.
Drawstring now replaced,
The trials proceeded.
Once there was a First Lieutenant,
Seething at the Triumph
Of a pathetic Wench
His words, not mine!
Impossibly,
The Harlot exceeds judgment.
Judgment far too lenient
Born of flirtations.
Sinful promises,
And seductive bribery.
At his wits end
The Lieutenant now sought
A more… direct approach.
Once there was a Finalist
Winner of two Challenges -
In the epilogue
Of her latest victory
The tavern
Packed with merry cheer and mead.
Competitors,
Some proud, some jealous,
Gathered to hear her triumph.
Once there was a Captain's Son
Boasting in a sweetheart's stead.
Though she was silent, wary, withdrawn.
Her dear, masculine, friend
Despite her begging and death threats -
Allowed his boasting to go on.
Boasting that increased
As he consumed fermented yeast.
Soon they blubbered in tunes
As she sipped her only drink,
Paid her tab and wandered out.
By now, the sun exchanged
For an open moon
And the village quiet
She felt observed and estranged.
Paying no mind,
She mounted her horse
And rode herself to bed.
Weeks went by,
Training moved on.
The final round drew forward
Six finalists remained.
T’was a fortnight before the finals,
When the challenge was announced:
Unlike previous trials,
A challenge of strategy.
Each competitor,
Given troops to lead.
For three weeks, a game of war
Week one:
Opponents matched in skill
Battle to ‘claim’ a territory.
Week two and three:
Battle a three way ‘war’
Judged on strategy, cunning.
They must win with Honor.
They must protect their troops.
They must be a Leader.
As she fought and lead
Through the first weak.
She placed as a finalist
(obviously)
So impressed, were the judges.
So infuriated, was a First Lieutenant.
Once there was a First Lieutenant
At his wits end.
Driven mad in his rage,
Desperate and afraid.
So sure she would fail,
That her luck would end here,
At the final challenge.
Fault proven
Tricks futile.
Truly,
Fear is the proven path.
Just one threat,
One well placed blade,
And she will cower
To a man, as she should.
Paying no heed, he did,
To clear contrary, he’d seen,
Her history had proven.
He basked at the “Perfection”
Of his new scheme.
The Wench: dealt with.
His Power: secured.
With some fun on the side…
Once there was a Captain’s Son,
Drinking to his love - friend!
Only his friend! -
Toasting in pride
To her victory.
Like many nights before,
She had slipped out, alone.
Unlike before,
He was sober enough to notice.
Aware, he was,
Of her preferred fun,
He would let her be,
Well aware of her competence.
Not before walking with her.
What?
He enjoyed her company!
Gazing in the dark,
He spotted her figure
Some distance forward.
It was then, his fond gaze
Drifted, noticing a large figure
Looming behind her.
Surprise yields weakness.
Quickly, she was yanked away
To a near alley
To fast for aid.
Once there was a dark night,
When a maiden soldier
forced against wall of stone.
Above her,
Hands pinned to futility.
She glared to cruel eyes
Eyes that shone
Of rage and lust.
Blade to her throat,
She struggled.
Like lightning,
Her dress sliced open,
Her front almost in tatters.
“Keep quiet, Wench,”
Spoke a familiar voice.
“Listen well, or suffer!”
Her assailant leaned forward,
Hot breath in her ear,
He spoke:
Forfeit your cheetings,
Relinquish your fantasies,
Or else, should i choose
To have some fun, Whore,
With such an enticing sight…
Oh she had longed,
When time had passed,
To shove that blade up his -
A holler broke her thought.
Her captor’s gaze shifted.
In his distraction,
He was left sterile,
From the blow of her knee.
Overcome by pain,
Quickly,
His blade: stolen.
And his wrist: twisted,
Pressed to his back.
She looked to find
Her friend rushing near.
Handsome eyes lit with fear.
With a handle to his head,
Her assailant out cold.
That night,
A new prisoner
Slept in the cells.
Once there was a traitor,
Stripped of his power and title,
Left to rot away, forever more,
Awaiting his creator.
Once there was a First Lieutenant,
Newly chosen and in love.
Honor granted from his father’s pride.
In a fortnight,
Her victory rewarded,
Though altered from the promised.
In her victory,
Her apprenticeship granted
Under the captain, himself.
Once there was a Captain,
One who fought longer and harder,
Then any before her.
For her,
Obstacles were larger,
Mountains were higher,
Trenches were deeper,
Enemies were fiercer.
Each difficulty
Pushed her further.
Failure was just
Too easy,
To be worth it.
The world’s cruelty
Fed evolution.
Strength grew
Where weakness, perceived.
Injustice fed her ire.
Insults carved her bones.
Emotion raise intelligence.
Birthing armed her nerves.
After millennia,
True strength
Found in her.
After all,
One must be strong
To survive this world.
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