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One Friday


One Friday
 
the unthinkable happened.
 
The Son of God
 
died.
 
Not
 
peacefully,
 
in old age 
 
surrounded by family and friends, 
 
but 
 
violently,
 
at age 33,
 
betrayed,
 
abandoned,
 
and denied by His friends,
 
surrounded by enemies like bulls,
 
like ravening, roaring lions.
 
The Word became flesh,
 
but the leather scourge 
 
weighted with lead balls 
 
and embedded with pieces of bone,
 
severed the flesh 
 
from the Word.
 
So the King once clothed in 
 
Majesty
 
now hangs on a cross 
 
naked,
 
exposing His bones 
 
to the gaping, 
 
jeering 
 
crowd, gambling on His robe.
 
The KING once crowned with Heaven’s praises,
 
Is now crowned with 
 
mocking thorns.
 
The Son’s Father 
 
is Not 
 
by His side,
 
But is too righteous,
 
too pure,
 
too holy, 
 
to look upon evil,
 
to look upon His Son 
 
Who became a curse 
 
for sinners, such as me.
 
So the Son drinks 
 
the FULL cup of His WRATH 
 
Alone,
 
prompting the Son to 
 
scream,
 
My God, My God,
 
Why have You forsaken Me?!
 
As He drinks God’s eternal justice 
 
condensed into one six-hour cup—
 
the cup that I
 
deserved, 
 
that should have been MY
 
portion
 
for ALL ETERNITY.
 
The sky watched as God’s Son
 
bore my sin, and 
 
from noon to three 
 
when the sun shines brightest,
 
the sun hid its face, 
 
and the sky clothed itself in black,
 
in sackcloth and ashes,
 
mourning the death of its Maker,
 
that occurred at 
 
the Ninth Hour 
 
when the psalmist’s words rang out,
 
from the lips 
 
that refused the sour wine with gall:
 
“Into Your hands, I commit My Spirit!”
 
The atonement 
 
is completed,
 
once and for all.
 
It 
 
is 
 
finished.
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