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one star shining


Beautiful star in heaven

shining for ever

can you make my wish came truth

can i please have someone to love

she has the mos beutiful smile

pure like the water

sweet voice,and strong will amazing.

 in the past i was in darkness feeling sadness

and just whit the same routine,just living day by day.

until the day you came.

whit the beautiful way . the way you treat me, beautiful smile

amazing hair, whit the feeling am i dreaming.

you are like a queen for me

to many quialities, any man will love to be 

close to you , ill be like a knigt, always ready to protect you.

i can be busy and afraid if im good enough for you, but i dont have nothing

more to offer only my life, and my heart is full of love and happiness.

the past is gone. the present in beautiful, and the future is a mistery, can i be

your knight .

you are a shining star

and i will always gonna be the first to admire

you and remind you how beautiful you are.

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misszoon
<p>Ohh, Mister Ramirez : what a nice gentleman in love who passes through here...</p>

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