One step, Two

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One step
Two  step
I'm almost at the door
 
Three step
Four step
Now I'm on the floor
 
One kick 
Two kick
No one hears me scream
 
Three kick 
Four kick
This seems a bit extreme
 
One hit
Two hit
Beat against my back
 
Three hit
Four hit
My vision goes black
 

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