THE ONE THAT WENT

April 19, 2016

When I was with you I was so happy we talked about the future but the destiny failed us,you went from a serious error I don't know what happened in the darkness it just looks extremity of sadness of our feelings,but you know something?in the other life exists something for us, I saw it in my thoughts in the dreams that one day we planned in the dedication with us intrigued by,healing the wounds,in the other life I'm with you,in the other life so I don't have to say you were the love who left,I wrote your lips in the darkness of my dreams and I put them every day of my life along with my space fragility. Close your eyes like you closed your soul so you can live with me the moment of happiness and tell the absence of existence that your footprints they impregnated at the bottom of my soul that hatred and heartbreak became more fragile. I joined so often sadness in the days that I lived next to you,I searched you so many times on my skin when I missed the days with you,you hit the soul as the fierce asteroid but I did it exploits in the sea of forgetfulness of the memories of your heartbreak. But why the light of something lit up inside your dark aquatic and deep memories of ice from the past that we let go,more you followed drowning more and more on it and deep it you missed out there.I tried to return you and I saved you but I did because you were okay but not for love you at all,the feeling was because it is so we humans are for saving us each other every moment. In the another life I will do what stay next to me then I don't have to say the one that went.

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Jonatanvega

Hello my name is Jonatan Vega as you all see I love poetry.My favorite languages are Spanish,French,English and some Italian,but my first language is Spanish.I live in US but I am from México.I am a college student at American River college in Sacramento,CA.I consider myself as very talented.I am very confident.I am kinda quiet,but when you get to know me I am amazing.I consider defining what the soul feels is art:poetry.I am a painful poet most of the time,but I could write about everything when I put that objective in my mind.I love love for what it is.i am a amazing person if you get to talk to me Some of My work focuses on what I see as the repression of women by men. This often takes the form of personal insults directed at men in general Love,Heartbreak.life changed my writing by helping me to lose my former models, and reach a more dramatic lyricism, my style now showed more realism than before.Recurring themes in my work include love,hearbreak,humanism, nature, alienation,loss, love, pain, growth, hope,death, family, sorrow, women’s issues, and violence.Although my portrayal of men is ironic and critical,I felt a strong need for love, and Im able to express the tension and passion these ambivalent feelings in poetry both simple and deeply sensual, expressing an original note in erotic poetry in a sensitive manner. . Facebook: @Jonatan Vegâ poeta instagram: @Jonatanvega_writesbooks Twitter:@Fearlessvega Any thing you want to know feel free to ask

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