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Only 20


Emptiness is all I feel, without you here. I walk past your room, searching for you. How can you be gone so soon? A life taken before its time. You're my sister though, why don't they understand. You can't be really gone, you're only 20. And each night as I lay down to sleep, I hear the echo of the train whistle. It cuts me like a knife. A deeper hole than I already have. You're only 20. So why aren't you here?
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savigirl14
<p>This poem is great. It's short and simple but you can tell how much emotion there is. I am sorry for your loss. But just remember all the good memories about her. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.</p>

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