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Do You Really Fear God 🤔


Some of us survive hard times, then spend our lives making shore everybody knows Christ, and at the same time, promise to answer the call so y'all won't feel what it's like to endure the pain all alone/some say... " you're too protective, can be aggressive "... I tell them " no, I just know from a young age what it feels like to not feel safe, all alone with no phone nor home/so please don't ever challenge my sins, my Lord will judge you by your 💜, your non repented sins, and how you treated misfit's, you know at the end if the Lord will or won't tell you..." YOU I HAVE NEVER KNOWN!!! "/you truly don't know how observant Dharmesh is, he welcomes discernment who can see the enemy coming from 4 miles/I feel your energy, I hear your different tones when you spoke, I read forced smiles/I am a cycle breaker, I handed survival instead of safety and I had to grow up fast/16 paying rent, September 10th, slaving at little Caesars, next slangin meth, could careless failing finals, didn't pass a damn class/I rather be a high school drop out than blindfold, ears closed and NOT recognize when drowning on dry land/and whether I'm Hi homez or fine bro, no one is labeled as mentally unstable more than the Chosen One who most won't see through mine and your bullchit, but I can/and I can say I know what it means to Fear Jesus, you better believe it, cause if I saw my enemy begging for anything to eat as I'm leaving Micky D's, he can keep it and I promise to deliver it in secret....
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Primarily autobiographical survival narrative with spiritual messaging.

SparseMeasureDense

Extremely dense; multiple ideas per line, rapid shifts between themes.

DarkSentimentBright

Mixed: painful past, protective anger, redemptive faith, compassion coexist.

StillEnergyExplosive

High-intensity voice; urgent tone, caps, exclamations, aggressive pacing.

MicroLengthEpic

Single extended passage approximately 45-50 lines of dense text.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Metaphors (drowning on dry land, cycle breaker), personification, vivid imagery.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Predominantly lyric interior voice with autobiographical confession and direct address.

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