Open and Vulnerable

Trouble came through 

shatters continue 

When I see my reflection

In the broken mirror

Can't seem to pick up the pieces

Words rumbling in my head 

scenerios tornade 

I am desperate to break free 

Finally feel what i've been longing

No more pleasing 

Just seeing 

Please see me 

See I'm hurting 

Come save me 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Celia Wilson

This was inspired by my past life events. I just want to keep it real and honest and never keep what I am feeling inside. 

 

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