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The Orb & Forbidden City


Orb & The Forbidden City metaphysical impulse ensues through the flames of resistance shun its existence etched beneath the tapestry of loosened conclaves alone in desperation in the night heavy sounds of cosmic illumination in temples of fire reaching ever higher on point locked in its duration of blackened shadows that block its vortex Deep underground softened rock hot lava molten rocks of resistant fervor soon to discover a faint whisper of a timeless deliverance within its vibration from temples of fire blowing up in its most purest of desire reside among us never to relent to ever give up the fight... so the story begins of ancient dwellers mining for gold with shovels & rocks one dweller found a key that would unlock an under world filled with quenched blackened desire... It was believed to be a door in the same vicinity but at night strangely the key was stolen there was a panic among the dwellers wondering who took their key all but a faint mystery yet in time it was soon to believe that a young merchant had it & brought it back so the search was on for this door that they were searching for until t last one day a Shamon came by to pray said to dig a least five feet down & there it was the door we all watched on as the door slowly opened to a city of mass portion with high off clifts we were greeted by a creature of demonic personification in nature there was an orb of ivory that glowed above the castle door couldn't realize how this place exists under ground all this time there was a unique safe haven that the creature brought me to with tea and muffins served couldn't compose myself was a wreck to say the least but the creature insisted to take calm there was nothing to fear for all was safe & secure then the orb stopped and the place went black a voice was heard, " Head Back" ! one step at a time we would climb to the door again and safely locked it behind us Then outside thunder and rain came down hovering over the dwellers never would we forget the place of the orb and the forbidden city
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Mario Vitale has written well over 1,000 poems toward his platform in creative writing. His main ambition is to receive a poetry contract. He looks up to present poets John Ashbery & Major Jackson for their contribution to the arts. Vitale studied theatre at Central Connecticut State university in New Britain, Ct. Presently you will see Vitale's poems on the world wide web such sites as Wrterscafe, Neopoet, Starlitecafe, Poetrysoup & Allpoetry.com He appears in anthology's, magazine articles and editor choice award for poetry. Facebook has been an outlet for Mario Vitale in connecting to family & friends.

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