From Other Eyes
I was taken aback
By your sudden words
Your pause
As I watched the emotions
Fall into form onto your face
I knew it was true
I looked to comfort you
As the tears fell
And suddenly it was you who comforted me
I know I have no right to be angry
But I am
It was a complete surprise
I wish I noticed sooner
Maybe I could have saved a life
But now he's gone
And it's just you and me
And our tears
Reminding us that this
Pain is real.
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