others might know mebut not

September 25, 2013

others might know me

but not as well as you

others might show me

yet i only see you

others might try drugs

others unhealthy foods

my addiction is a powerful drug

these hugs and kisses from you.

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xione7Sep 25, 2013

<p>i would apreciate some feed back. constructive critiscism is welcomed but do not be mean about it. </p>