-otion

Sun, 10/29/2017 - 16:30 -- row one

Living life on earth is just poetry in motion

Constant locomotion

Everything is focused on devotion or emotion

Yet there is this notion

That there needs to be remotion of emotion

And people all have a different devotion 

Be it God, or their lover, or the ocean

And now, through this constant commotion 

We need to take time to take a counter motion 

And

Take 

Breath. 

This poem is about: 
Our world
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