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Our days together


As I watch the days go pass I wonder why I bother both my mother and father sitting there drinking and smoking away their lives. Its sad to think of what might happen. I dont want them to go so what do I do? I take some action. Everytime I help or say something to them they say they try. However, i still fear. Maybe in this lifetime they will figure out what is important here and now. I must say I love them and I wish them the best as I watch my lifes directions make it to great success. As I complete my life I hope they are proud. I dont smoke or drink plus my grades are like wow. All A's so far so please stop the drinking and smoking I need you here to see me for the greater things in life are waiting for you. I want you to be here and watch our lives go by, however, it wont last unless you give up your weakness. So put down the drinks and the smokes I love you too much to just now let you go.
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