Our last hour

Come with me my love come let's run away,
Give me even just an hour of your busy day.
I promise I won't bite I promise I won't cry,
Just give me one last chance before we say good bye.
By chance I mean to see you and hold a conversation,
And here how much our co workers bring us constant irritation.
Just for today just let it be,
Come take my hand and runaway with me.
You're life will go oin when I leave you outside your place,
And i'll drive away knowing I got a chance to see your face.
Just one more hour baby I'm begging you please,
Then it'll be like the earth swallowed me.
I can't seem to drive away cause your eyes and body tell me other wise,
So come with me Laura i'll help you fly
-S. Gonzalez

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