Our Spot
It was early
And birds were singing
Scattered patches of deep grass boarded the egg shell rocks
And the bitterly cold water
Four benches sit across from each other
As my love sits on the first
Above a grass patch
Staring off into the distance
She watches the birds fly over the water
Searching for there first meal
The wind plays with her tree-bark hair
Highlighted eggplant purple
Intertwining with a light maroon
The sun begins to rest above and behind our heads
We perpare to get back onto our bikes for the ride back to camp
Along an abandonded dirty-grey path
This was our spot
Later that evening we return
Sit back down on the same bench
Look over a sea
As calm as her when sleeping
A lemon yellow fades into an autumn-leaf orange
Fluffed clouds stretch across the landscape
Reaching for the space above
Lifting over a sun as it holds them up
And illuminates the island below
As the day drifts away, so do the boats
Birds no longer sing and she whispers,
"This is our spot"
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