Our Stars
I asked you for some stars
You told me to follow you
But the deeper into the forest
The less I could see the real view
The farther away from home
The more pain you took away
It’s just me you and the stars
Nothing else to say
I remember when you asked for water
I took you to the sand
We walked on the coast for hours
The world resting in our hands
Then the night grew faster than day
And the moon came to say hi
Not a single other friend here
But billions in the sky
I remember the first time I felt light
You were right there by my side
It was warm and bright oh I miss the light
From the stars way up high
Then you asked for some patience
So I waited in the sea of stars
With the water, stars, light and you
The whole world can be ours
But when you stopped asking
I knew something wasn’t right
Then my eyes open back up
And I start to see the light
But not from our stars
This just feels wrong
I take a look around and realize
You were never there all along
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