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Out of control


Dizzy, dizzy

spinning, spinning,

faster, faster

spiraling out of control

in my own home 

surrounded by those i love

they cant help the constant spinning

as it comes from within.

the spiral that brings me down 

and throws me on the ground.

the world still spins above me 

as i hit rock bottom

i have to get control 

before i loose myslef. 

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