OVER
One drop of a salty liquid falls
Its a tear caused by neglect.
Pain that's on the inside.
The drops keep falling
but now theres a
increasing
stream
getting
bigger turning
into a river that
can't be suitable for
life the bottom is farther than
you thought it's unreachable you are
drowning panicing your breath stops and its
OVER.
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