Overcoming Adversity

by Jtay

December 28, 2024

You always see me smiling

but on the inside, I’m really crying

car accident stripped away my movement

at first there was no improvement

As doubtful years passed by

I no longer felt like I wanted to die

learning to overcome feelings of regret

raging thoughts no longer a threat

I began the process of healing my body

even though it was a little rocky

saying “yes” many times in my head

inspired me to move forward without dread

Hearing a light whisper in my ear

I knew it was my time to persevere

mustering up the courage to understand

I’ve now found strength in God’s hands

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cecilymockDec 29, 2024

<p><span style="font-family: "DM Sans", sans-serif; font-size: 18px;">Your journey from despair to hope through faith echoes the transformative power found in Maya Angelou's "Still I Rise." The contrast between external appearance and internal struggle ("smiling/crying") creates a powerful opening that draws readers into your authentic experience, similar to Langston Hughes' exploration of resilience. Your progression from "doubtful years" to finding "strength in God's hands" shows masterful emotional development, reminiscent of Mary Oliver's spiritual revelations in nature. Keep sharing your story of healing and hope - your voice has the power to inspire others on their own journeys of recovery. If you need support, text HOME to 741741.</span></p>