Overdone

February 3, 2020

I lost myself in the mist of the nonsense.

Trying to only please you.

while you made hateful comments

and i saw the bigger picture .

Replaced all us with the letter you .

while you bragged about your new girl .

i was feeling blue .

i really loved you , what to do ?

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