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Personally I believe when you lose comfort, is when you learn what matters/when you realize the relationship was founded by lust, please be mentally robust, then maybe down the ladder, you'll find love, begin a new chapter/some of the most important conversations happen in silence, blinded, still see through the chatter/flip sides, sing but no jahiem (R&B singer) or can't rap, no chance as da rapper/I have a better chance seeing the rapture with Nasir and the one after serving no master, laughter 🤣/biopsy can be the end, chemotherapy is not ur friend, if you consume nicotine, yes Parliaments, you've then defeated cancer/trust a politician, physics, scientific scientist intuition, prescriptions, primary care physician, or a U.S.American Jewish president again????.... chit, even A.I. (Allen Iverson) wouldn't question the answer/mind over matter, never become so thirsty that you drink from every cup, cuz it might be shit from your your carpet/common sense is a blunt of dro that doesn't blow, depending who spark'd it/common sense is a flower that doesn't grow in everyone's home garden/if you believe in Jesus would you feed a once temporary friend, who turned into your enemy when he turned you in, at Mickey D's if he was starving? Quiet alarming darling, you told'em" kick rocks snitch and eat a sick dick bitch/then say grace, ask for forgiveness, repent after the sin you just did commit, at 6:26? Shit, Yeshua is not the One to be bargaining with, you're not the smartest kidd, no common sense, this is coming from a convicted kid who did a bid, locked in juvenile detention with no education and who has a nephew that's clinically medically retarded, autistic/but regardless, I want y'all to know this, some people are only meant to love from afar, but they're still in your heart, knowing your bro is LEOnardo DiCaprio departed. .... mic drop, Amen and tell a friend.
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Mostly personal wisdom and autobiographical reflection with some abstract philosophical moments.
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