The Pain Of Drowning
"It's hard enough to live
Without the hurt and pain
But I can't seem to win
Or stop the awful shame
But since I'm not seen at all
I watch my spirit fall
And try to find a way
To crack and break the clay
'Cause even if I fail
At least I tore the vail
And showed the world around me
That I was really drowning
And that they could have saved me."
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