Palpitations of Good Noise

Mon, 03/25/2013 - 01:09 -- nyaz10

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American Samoa

Oh when the base drops.
Beads of sweat flying off of warm skin.
Lights a flashing in
synchronized motions.
Teens giving off imperial notions.

Beats collapsing in to voids.
Tunes in constant states of flux.
A boy turns and tucks.
A girl leaps and flings.
More people crowded into these things.

Increasing pleasure
brought by good measure.

Oh when the base drops.

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