Paradise

by soniawrites

July 11, 2013

There came a time when i realized

the world is a beautiful place

it was paradise

but then i realized

i didnt belong

because happiness

was something

i just couldnt feel.

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LomuseJul 11, 2013

Well, nothing is impossible. Keep calm for paradise will reach you when you're not even looking one day. Paradise is for everyone whether or not they think they belong. -Keep Smiling :)