Paradise

 Am I lost or have I looked too far into the truth into the valley of death where we all perish in? 
 I want to live can't you see I am fighting for my life but I've decided to stop
 It seems you've tested me to my last possible breathe because if living is pain then is death paradise?
 Because maybe the paradise that is talked about here isn't from the living but from the fallen angels that have been to paradise.
 I can't wait to see them there, my new family, Jesus, God, Angels, my new paradise
 Take me if you need me because I'm ready to go I am ready to give up my pain 
                          
                         Just give me paradise.

This poem is about: 
Me

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